docs: tweaks for installation instructions
@@ -37,9 +37,6 @@ services will be installed for you:
- On-premise using ``det-deploy``, Docker will need to be installed.
- Manual install, you will have to install each service yourself.
-Determined supports an optional :ref:`users` system, which allows teams of machine learning
-developers to organize the assets they create inside Determined.
-
More information on a Determined cluster can be found:
- :ref:`requirements`
@@ -71,8 +68,8 @@ the option of installing most components of Determined using Debian
packages and running them as `systemd
<https://freedesktop.org/wiki/Software/systemd/>`__ services.
-For on premise, first :ref:`install Docker <install-docker>`. Then install Determined
-by your preferred method:
+To install Determined on-premise, first :ref:`install Docker <install-docker>`.
+Then install Determined by your preferred method:
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